Mabelles Bedroom Description I like the clear description, so it's easy to visualise. You have used good related descriptive words. Awesome description of your room Alex. In the corner on one side there is a small mirror and above it a poster of my name, that reminds me who I am everyday when I see it. Finally, the coldness, if its snowing that cup of water is frozen almost solid, I had to use three blankets those mourning, it gets really chilly. This answers first letter of which starts with S and can be found at the end of Y. I like the part when you recognise that your room needs cleaning and organise your things to feel much comfortable but most of all you are comfortable in your room. I think your writing has really improved this year. Next to them I have tall, white draws bulging with clothes. Sometimes in the mornings it can be really cold but when that heat pump goes on it makes it better. This results in territorial disputes, arguments over who turns off the light at bedtime, and, worst of all, extreme mess. You used the write amount of good words in the right places. I want to be out playing with my friends.. Maybe expand on some of these so we know more detail eg: what type of animals can you hear? The story behind this is that ogres are usually thought of as being dirty, smelly, and unkept. The decoration part for my room. In total I have 9 hats that make my room stand out and the brands on many are monster energy, Billabong e.t.c. Try next time to make some of your objects more descriptive and not just the colours. There is also a tall boy and an inbuilt wardrobe where I keep all of my shirts for school. The colour. My wardrobe is a double sliding door with a grey color. My room is big and there is lots of space to do fun activities like board games and flips. you could add some more descriptive words, Angus your punctuation was good but your spelling had a couple of 'i's in stead of a I. Inside that drawer is where I hold more of my goods and books. All kinds of blue from baby blue to electric blue to sky blue - there is a lot of blue. Once you eyes have shifted again you will see my big, pure white chest of draws in the right hand corner of the room pressed firmly against both the right hand wall and the wall with the window in front of you. My king single bed is jammed in the right hand corner with my beside table just beside it and underneath my window. These creatures are also patterned on my bedsheets and pillowcases, companionable to me in the small hours. Harriets Bedroom I my room there is lots of colours all around it. There are many spaces of my room everything from cloths on the draws and my bed in the corner. I hate tidying my room but this is something that needs to be done more often. My bedroom isn't that big so storage isn't easy for all of the clutter I have. A retreat is usually thought of as somewhere thats relaxing and calm. Bedrooms need to have the perfect layout so that you have floor space in your room to do things, personally I have enough floor space. These are placed where there is one up and one down all along the top of the wall. Thanks to those paintings my room has some colour. An excellent description of your room Meg. I ventured into my room, with the sunshine streaming in. No i have to go and clean up my room. I wouldnt mind a bigger bed, though! Like it get messy easily, not a lot of room to have fun and other thing. You have some good simple vocabulary. Then where you enter my bedroom behind the door there is my Hockey gear, Swimming bag and my School bag. It's not really the best looking room because it's really messy and has light pink wallpaper. There are special items in my bedroom that cost a lot of money and one of those accessories are my Hats . Jessie, I liked the length of the paragraphs and the descriptive words that you put in. That is exactly what it looks like. You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. 10 metaphors to describe a place. The best part of my room is the furniture and layout. The colors that are used are light sea blue, grey and black. It may be the second smallest room in the house but Im proud to call it mine.This style of bedroom works well for me and fits me perfectly. But over all, I like my room. I have a single bed which it is made from wood as its frame, it has a black with grey duvet, and if you look above it, theres an adorable tiger painting. But i think I saw some spelling mistakes. Very well written i liked the word choices and how you alborated on it, there was nothing that I could find that needed work i would give you a 4+, Very good way of describing room. One of my most treasured items in my bedroom is a large canvas painting of a multi coloured elephant that sits above my pink beanbag. Over by the side of the wall is my birth certificate that is framed and it tells me the meaning of my name where it originated from and a paragraph about who I am and stuff about me. The typical teenage boys room is a disaster area. Well done Emma I could really picture your bedroom well use of spelling and I like the words you have used. Quite an old room perhaps. Buy Study Guide. Look at the picture and make sentences to describe the bedroom. A metaphor for home explains your feelings about your home by using figurative language. I have shiny white wardrobes that are very large. I have a white bedside table with an alarm clock, a rose red touch lamp, and a blue bluetooth speaker. My desk is a white desk and is placed against the back of the room to give a feeling that the colors are spaced out. I noticed that one word keep coming up wrong, it was colour. Be good to keep the clothes off the floor! Now another thing about my room is that it is never clean well unless mum cleans it but there's always something on the ground like a lunch box or cloths mostly cloths. It is made of pine so is a rather light golden brown in colour. Right in front of you as you walk in is my blue patterned desk with my small, white basketball hoop hanging above. My room has a modern style to it because of the things I have in it. As I wade through the swamp of clutter I find things I lost from months ago. metaphors to describe a bedroom the root operation that is defined as correcting a portion of Thanks for dropping by. Sometimes a little bit of exaggeration creates the best metaphors. If you go into My room you will probably think it's really big and very messy, and the first thing you will see is the pink wallpaper and the rips and sellotape on the walls. It also has a table which is made from birch. I love the colour scheme in my bedroom as turquoise blue is one of favourite colours. Personally I really like my room. Old messy modern and not cared about is the first and foremost idea of the room. Your editing hasn't been done too poorly Joel. The cleanliness of my room is not good at all. A midnight black bedside table to go with the other colours in the house and also to go with the short stack that is my other set of drawers that has felt blue and green draws. Dotted around my room are a bunch of different things. Most of the ideas are elaborated equally. I like how you described your mum telling you to clean your room all the time haha. the room was smelly like dirty socks. You have elaborated on your ideas and have given the reader evidence why it is like that. You could visualize your whole room.The furniture paragraph is very good. I wouldnt say that I have a colour theme in my room but if I had to say what colours stood out to me I would say all shades of blue, pink and green. The rest of the walls are a nice white color and it goes with the furniture that is against it. The only way my room is brightened up is by having furniture with colour. With blue sheets on it and a big pink and blue duvet. Outside if you are lucky you can hear the birds chirping because my mum throws bread outside for the them to eat in the winter months. A metaphor is a word or phrase that is used to make a comparison between two things. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. The floor in my bedroom. So I have my bed on the left wall and on the other side of my bedroom is my tv cabinet. This makes our room one of the darkest rooms in our house. The color of my wardrobe connected to my wall is black I would probably want to change the color to the same as the wall. Your paragraphs could of been a bit bigger, I like your ideas and you described it really wall. and at night when it's extremely cold I turn on my speedy heating friend my electric blanket and snuggle right down into my black and white duvet and my purple fluffy sheets. The entranceway to my room holds a flowery scene: crocheted poppies and daffodils blu-tacked to their places, accompanying a daisy-shaped doorbell. It is strewn with piles of clothes and virtually impossible to walk through. You might say my bedroom is a mess but to be honest this is as tidy as you will get it. But on the other hand you could of give more ideas and elaborate more on the topic and it would be a better description. It has a very comfy mattress and white sheets. as your beautiful grey carpet is covered with clothes sometimes! The last thing in my room is my bed. I liked the way that you used the senses to give a more detailed effect about your bedroom. My duchess is across from my bed flat against the left hand wall. Great writing Shadyn really liked it, I still ant that ps4 of yours though! Well in my room I don't have that much furniture but I am going to tell you what I do have. The creamy brown carpet is pleasant. Bunkhouse Western Fabric, Great bedroom description Shadyn, I loved how you punctuated your sentences and it made it easy to read, you also have a good use of grammar. They are also quite long and the spelling is really good. I have a window that covers the whole wall so you can see outside. At the back of my room there is a large window exposing the magnificent mountains covered in a blanket of snow, my other window gives a happy view of a fence which we share with our neighbour. If you are 13 years old when were you born? I opened the door, it creaked and made a sound like someone's fingers on a chalk board. Next my colours that live in by bedroom let me think, oh yea beige and blue. 5. If you walk into my room your senses would explode because of the smell, sight, sound, touch. Accessories is definitely one of my favorite things to see in my room. Things that you need to work on is the punctuation and the length of your sentences. Virgo Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility, Taurus Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility, Scorpio Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility. I'm serious it's a mess (I cleaned it yesterday) with clothes and toys all over the place. cock is life. Two beds tucked in opposite corners, each with bedside tables and desks nearby for ease of use. Now you can go to your room and make it the way you want it and design it the way you like it. Sences in my bedroom are a fresh air smell, because the window is usually open in my room. Maybe next time don't use 'my' too much. The only thing thats in there is a couple of dresses I never wear and some picture frames that my mum forgot to take out when she moved rooms. There is a popular Australian movie called The Castle that uses this metaphor in the title. I usually put the feathered ones at the bottom and the cotton ones on the top. Running down the old wooden corridor a floorboard squeaked underneath my pounding feet. I also have bright dots that include the colours of light and bright pink, a turquoise dark and light and yellow. My bed isnt the brightest as its grey, black and white. I would like my room to be neater and tidyer so my mother would not be nagging at me all the time saying pick up your clothes Bree or make your bed Bree. My bedroom has 4 walls and in one large window on the south-west side. Now what it looks like so I have a blue carpet and cream colored walls and a rug in the corner of my room. Its there to hold previous achievements and precious keepsakes but I really just use it to hold some certificates that cant find in my bookshelf. Writers usually describe the setting at the very start of a story. My bedroom When I walk into my bedroom I always love that feeling when it is so so warm that you just lay there and forget about everything. You might go to a spa retreat or meditation retreat to escape from the world and get some relaxation. Its got a squishy top. The movie is about a family trying to save their home (their castle) from developers who are trying to forcibly take it off them. For self fun and study. The sight can be sometimes messy, with my clothes everywhere. My bed is really messy, it would be rare to see it made. I hope you have had a virtual journey of what my bedroom looks like, have been taken through a story of my bedroom and know why I like my bedroom. as your room! Great descriptions and fun to read. How long will the footprints on the moon last? I bet your glad to get out of your old room. I think it is awesome you describe things in you bedroom so well and I saw it so clear in my head. And my tall and thin window opposite the door as you come in which is my main source of light in the day. Then you notice the two untidy desks slightly to the right of my dresser. The theme of my room is simply Mine there are no requirements, no needs, nothing it is just whatever I make it to be. Your description is really good. (He is messy.) I have a black bed side table that is woodin and I have a plastic clock, then I have a grey alarm clock that I really dislike because it wakes me up and I don't like getting up. Feels very hot. I have a lot of space. Then straight ahead you will see my drawers with three pukeko statues and some other items. When you walk into my room youll see my bed in the far right corner. The style of my room is perfect. Everyday Life Metaphors. The colours in your room must be very bright with the sun on it and I can visualise your room. No need to be fancy, just an overview. But good over all, Shadyn this is an accurate explanation of your teenage boy's bedroom. My room was and old garage and now it is a room that has an olden day look, but still feels like a modern room. Also another way to brighten the room would be to open the curtains. Very well written. There might even be a ball stuck between the TV and wall. Flagstone Cost Per Pallet, You could add more information on the accessories in your room. I deposit myself there to snuggle up with a book, stroke my darling cat or simply sit on my bed, daydreaming, soaking up the sacred silence. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. By William Wightman 8WH. Also when you look down ot my window you can see the workshop and the shed. So, if you referred to your home as a retreat, you would be saying that your home is a peaceful place to escape from the world belong. In general, one might get the idea that metaphors are preferred to describe a bad user experience rather than a good one. The furniture is really comfy and I really like it. My room is a pigsty it has clothes all over the floor, shoes all over the floor and of course food plates that my dog has cleaned up. Describe The Room Your In Describe the room you are in Dark, empty and cool; I gaze ahead at the room before me, with only the sound of the air conditioner thrumming. The sheets of my bed are blue black, white with a bit of gray for the frame of the bed. I agree with the carpet needing vacuumed, I've been telling you for weeks too. Very descriptive though - well done! I have lots of little nips and nobs that I use to make my room more interesting. On the right hand side as you walk in there is an orange feature wall with a small white window towards the top. Secondly are my accessories I have many accessories in my room but there is three that stand out to me my PS4, tv and Headset. Feed-forward - I can't think of anything bad about this (For this category at least) great job! I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing. Can't see any spelling errors good job . Glider Tow Pilot Jobs Arizona, Nice job Andrew really liked reading your piece of writing it deserves well. My favourite part of my room sitting next to the window is my single bed. I do everything in my room, im pretty much always in there. I like my room because it's got enough space for all my stuff like my table for doing homework and my spare bed for if I have any friends come over. I have a bed right in the middle of my squarish room, which takes up quite a bit of space, but I like it that way. You could work on the adjectives but otherwise very good. Im honestly surprised that its still hanging on to the wall and not falling, judging by all the weight its carrying. I also share the cupboard with my sister, meaning that I have the right side of the cupboard for my items. As I creep through the messiness there begins a pile of lego pieces on the grey dull carpet waiting for someone to stand on it and be be pricked. Style , layout , accessories and furniture are the 4 best qualities about my bedroom because that's what makes it mine. It feels like an environment that I like to be in. My bedroom isnt so great. 4, I like how you describe where the objects in your room where. The storage is great because it is hidden away above my wardrobe, which is built into the wall, although most of my stuff goes under the bed. It is a square shape and it is warm. Now I have my wardrobe at the foot of my bed because it makes it very easy to access when I wake up every excruciating morning. I think Annie has given an accurate and fair description of her room. The colour and brightness are perfect in mostly every way possible. Your vocabulary was really good, you used nouns and adjectives well. good work. If were in a restless, jumpy and excited mood, then we may as well have OCD, because everything will be perfect. The theme of my bedroom is black, white, blue and grey. On one side is a three section wardrobe with most of my craft supplies in it. I am fond of the fact that it is my own place, and that everything is just right. Good description Bree. I like the way you described it and detailed all of your ideas in paragraphs. My next topic is my rooms cleanliness. My room has an area where I keep drawing and pictures, an area for me to keep my collections. My room is not too empty but its not too full either. 4. as bright as a day. But you a lot of descriptive words. But most of the time, me and Sam are in different moods. It is filled with many happy memories, prayers, fights with myself and resolutions. I have all my electronics are sitting next to my bed charging like my computer and my phone and ipad . The cloths on the large draws with the big mirror really need to be tidied up and put away properly then there is the pile of bags that have my ski gear and cricket bag the big bags could deffently be tidyed up and put in the garag. Its mine and I like it the way it is. I have a ps3 sitting in my room waiting for me to get my t.v put in which will be a samsung t.v. Sometimes you cant hear anything because Im sleeping or the sound on my ipod is turned off. On the left side wall there is a wooden desk and stool and also a white shelve covered in shells and camera gear. Posters are another thing people have in their room, in my room I have one poster of a 3D of a coral reef. But some of the stuff in my room is going to sold so I can make more space. Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment. Some people might call this theme a colourful mess, but I think otherwise. And make sense of your sentences. Metaphor Examples for Intermediate Readers The slashes indicate line breaks. I think that you could work on adding a few more descriptive words. Now my bedroom has amazing accessories such as the the useful charger plug built into the wall! 4+. when you said mental trip you were bang on. So my layout might be tight, but it works for me. Dont sniff to much or else you will smell the dirty clothes on the floor. Sorry your room is so small! I use my bedroom to sleep, relax and sometimes do my homework. Another is made by myself, I got to design and paint it however I liked. The colours in my room are bright with my duvet which is mixed with bright light colour then there is my light blue curtains hanging by a Dark aqua chair. I have heaps of pictures in my room, on my wall I have a picture of a duck (which I took) and in my wardrobe there are pictures of my dog, family and friends. Your spelling needs some tweaking but overall I think you've done really well :). I almost feel bad for the things that have slided down the back and not found until the layout of my room changes. When you walk into my room you will see famous NBA (National Basketball Administration) players, such as Kobe Bryant, Michael Jordan and Allen Iverson it's like my gold to my treasure box. Really good George, there were no spelling mistakes I could see. 4+, Oh my goodness Jake! It also has jumps for my motorbike but you cant really see them because they are covered over with grass since I dont go on them much anymore. On the left hand side under the window, with its red quilt and white duvet is the biggest piece of furniture in my room. You could improve on adding more ideas and making them a bit more interesting. As an Amazon Associate I Earn from Qualifying Purchases. Very well detailed with accessories and colours. Needs work on the punctuation. It has three drawers with coloured red, yellow and green and they hold some of my clothes. You need to work on editing on your opening sentence. You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. Some names needed capitals. When I walk into my bedroom, it instantly feels as though I am in my own, private space. Your punctuation is also correct, and I didn't see any wrong. Finally, you look a little bit to the right and see a closet, that's where I would love to have a little seating area with a seat and a lamp so could my little private area. you also need to indent your paragraphs. By Angus Stewart, I like how you have clearly stated your paragraphs. In conclusion I love my room as it has a great view, is a good size, my bed is amazingly comfy and the colours are awesome. I have enjoyed reading this and laughed a few times at how accurate your description is. I have lots of sports gear lying around like my rugby ball and boots with skis and poles with my clothes for skiing. Apart from mum and dad's room my room is the only room with a double bed as well, I think my room is very unique and bright and I like it. My carpet, I like my carpet Dont get me wrong I like the light creamy color that gets me comfy, I like the nice pillow feeling of it and how it eases me to sleep really quickly. You have some great ideas and I can get a really good visualisation of your room. I suck creamy cock. The couch in the corner is also like a trunk that holds most my stuff. My walls are light blue and my ceiling is white. I think my bedroom is amazing but still has a bit of work to be done on it for it to be a masterpiece! They also allow a lot of sunshine to come in, no matter what the season. Writing By Brody Kershaw. Or, it might be used to express how dirty the home is. The final piece of furniture is a tall drawer set, which contains five drawers worth of clothing. Feed-forward - You had nouns but boring adjectives 'A computer that is big and fun' add more description to it 'Speakers that are loud' it's too boring be more interesting. But probably my biggest color is black or white as I have quite a few drawers that are black and white. Troy you have used some good vocab. you have structured you description writing and have a bit of punctuation mistakes There is a famous song with the line Home is wherever Im with you. The editing for your description is great, haven't found any mistakes. The odours of the room could be smelt from the kitchen. But thankfully, I dont have to suffer these flaws much longer, because in the holidays, Ill be moving rooms and Ill have the smallest but sunniest room in the house. Curtains and carpet are the same grey colour, but the carpet is so soft you could sleep on it. But I don't even know why the window is there in the first place! This means I get most of the afternoon sun. I have a COD (Call of Duty) BO3 poster a COD 4 Remastered poster and my certificates of every school I ever went to. I suck creamy cock. There are books all over the place. We dont need all these lights on!. From an outside point of view, it seems to be arranged in an orderly fashion. What Type Of Muzzleloading Firearm Is The Most Popular And Most Commonly Used Among Hunters Today?, I think that my room is pretty cool because I have it all to myself and I have a lot of stuff in it, the carpet is pretty cool aswell. It's the worst having such a messy bedroom. Ano ang mga kasabihan sa sa aking kababata? On the other side of the room is my chair with my blanket that fades from blue to white. There is a big black shoebox beside my bed which fits all my shoes in it. Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM Time for the most exciting part of it, the bed. If I got to change my room I wouldnt change it because I think my room is the best for me and I like it just the way it is. It is a large room that comes out of the side but barely gets any sunlight and heat. You just need to open up your curtains more to get the better light. The accessories on my wall is clean and probably not that safe to be under but i think that i could call it wall art. Someone who doesnt like being at home might call it a prison. My bed is in the corner of my room because there is no other space for it to go. A few things to fix up but over all it was good. 3. Alexs bedroom My lamp is blue with a very bright light. The bedroom is a place of solitude, a place to just relax, I spend most of my time either sleeping or reading and the rest of the time is for cleaning, it's not the fanciest but it's mine. There was a couple of spelling mistakes though. I have a wooden modern looking bed side table where I put my trophies and books. Cartoon drawings load the wall that I've drawn in my spare time, the weekends for a hobby. Earrings, jewelry, crafts and a whole bunch of other stuff piled on top of the dresser. Is your bedroom like mine dirty and smelly. My miniature dog and cow sculptures sitting on my desk beginning to gather dust. I like her use of descriptive words and the slight humour. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. On the far side of my room is an old desk that needs getting rid of because all it does is collect dust. Next time your could probably add some more descriptive words, not saying that there was not any but just add some more in like more bigger descriptive words. I really enjoyed this story. The underfloor heating is the main source of heat in our house. Georges Bedroom Even my parents say it is ugly. Don't forget punctuation. This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. The furniture is a nice light brown. The clothes are untidy because they cant fit into each draw. It's Romeo's line about his inamorata: "Juliet is the sun." David Silverman Simpsons Net Worth, Beside that there is my mini bookcase that is full of unread books, over from that there is my wardrobe full of junk and extra clothes. Descriptive writing is one of the essential skills that children will learn in school and progress into life. Brothers Of A Feather Driving Wheel Lyrics, All of the furniture is pretty old for example the punk bed is about five years old and the dresser is about eight but its still in good condition. The Five Imdb Parents Guide, Jakes Bedroom Opposite my window is my cupboard. But you did miss out a few commas. Your vocabulary is really cool, but I think that you could have some more adjectives. For me and my sisters to fit in our room the room has to be laid out a specific way, but it is pretty comfy. In my room you would hear gunshots roaring from my TV. My rooms walls are two different colours. By William Middleton. There's pillows and rugs lying among my room, worn out posters and books stuffed in my wardrobe. The reason why my room is my room is because the wallpaper, the wallpaper is nicely placed in cool spots. Good work I don't think you need to improve. There are so many little pieces to remember that I dont even know nearly half of them even exist. There is a similar popular simile that means the same thing: my home looks like a bomb hit it. In the corner an old dark glory box to go with the old wooden jewelry box upon the set of draws. Reubens bedroom description My bed is on the other side of the room behind the door, and my bedside table with my draws with my dvd player and some clothes. I enjoyed reading your writing illustrates without hesitation what your room feels and looks like. I think its very organised also it makes it feel spacious. The third most used color is brown as most of my cabinets is that color so I have many bland colors not colorful colors. Solfeggio 852 Hz, Logan I like how you tell the truth but your spelling needs work and maybe thinking about what your trying to say. 4+. I need to describe a bedroom using metaphors and iam completely lost i cant think of anything so if you could help i would really appreciate it! Jackson's dresser is really new and its still in good condition. When you look in my room you will see that it is kind of a square shape with green and graffiti wallpaper. 3. as ancient as the sun. My Bedroom Personally I love my bedroom. But at one point you said in your accessories paragraph "But they aren't dirty they are actually quite clean all thanks to my dog." I am going to take you on a mental journey around my bedroom. I have heaps of shells laying around the room and of course the posters and paintings of the beach. Its small and cluttered, so there's no where to move. Most of the times it has clothes that cover the floor. In the distance you can see the woolshed, it is made out of corrugated iron, like the chook shed it is pretty messy on the inside though. I also have 2 paintings on the wall, I used to have 3 but my nephew ripped one off so it is lying in my stuffed toy pit now. You used some great vocabulary like chaos, but there were a few places that you could of used a better word than the one you did use. I hop into my cosy bed. Everyone wants to have the perfect bedroom, the best way to do that is to make it your own. Nice story and good use of commas and punctuation. The accessories. Skateboards are propped up against the plain back wall next to my bed. At the end of the expedition we leave a wonderful place and head back into the real world. But besides from that it is an awesome room and I love it. Good description of your bedroom (mess and all). A stout red beanbag accommodates a spot near the middle of the room. to the right of that is a small toy box filled to the brim and next to it there is a big wardrobe that I never use. On my right hand side wall as you walk in there are my bright football posters, my flag poster and my Crusaders flag. Overall, I am very happy with my room and love the colour scheme that I have. In my room we have really ugly wall paper, it is green and white, but ugly green. The fresh air circulates the room which gives me a sense of new and relaxation. Because its too big to get out the door and it sits almost in front of my door and we cant get it out and I hate it. The furniture in my room fits nicely with my double bed in the corner by my door, my bedside table beside that, my desk in the corner beside the windows and my chair beside my wardrobe. The color of it is a creamy vanilla look but its actually a bright yellow. But the floor is not the messy thing in my room my wardrobe is, my wardrobe is where all the dirty clothes are that I can't be bothered to put away, when I have to tidy my room so I just put them in my wardrobe. Thirdly, the colors. You have missed out on some things ie. To call your home a dump is to say that its a complete mess! All of this talking about my room reminded me of something, I need to clean it or Ill get banned from the Xbox. So overall i think my bedroom is a wonderful place to relax and do my own thing so I wouldn't change a thing about it. Well in my bedroom I have blue and white walls. The layout of my bedroom has my bed in the middle and then there is a gap between my brown clothes draw and my bed. The spelling and Grammar was good and no spelling mistakes but you could use some more descriptive words. I dont like vacuuming so I try to get out of it as much as I can. Beware of the wardrobe if you go underneath it something is bound to fall on your head or all my stuff will avalanche out. Chargers, Polaroid, medals and cards are a big part of my accessories. A normal room for a 13 year old. I didn't notice any capital mistakes throughout your writing. The mother has to handle all of these things, and is feeling like shes trying to coordinate a zebra, giraffe, and elephant, to all work in unison! I think you have used some good verbs to describe your room and it has lots of information. I like how you made them all simple but have a bit of depth. A few more sensory descriptions of your room maybe but we would happily rate you 4+. Your spelling was pretty good. The vocobulary is very good aswell. My king-single bed is placed directly in the middle of my room with my dresser, containing all of my clothes, on the left hand side. It was interesting to learn about some of her feelings about her private space. If you want to read a book from my bookshelf you can, but most of the good ones probably would've slipped down behind it,along with anything you sit on top of my bookshelf. Style of the room is mine and only mine if anyone can match my unique style they all mash up together to make the bedroom mine. Great detail in your paragraphs Jessie. My accessories, however arent as basic as my furniture, but rather the opposite. So, you can use this metaphor! The wall opposite the door has three picture that me and my sisters had painted quite a while ago. Then, you were talking about how the home had turned into a place of work. My curtains are white with a see through sort of material over top. Now I will move on to how clean my room is. However, if you cautiously open the drawer, it looks as if a bomb has exploded inside. Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly. Its plywood walls and lumpy concrete floor give it a rugged and unique feel. This layout works really well for me. The lamp rests on a stack of six books that are all ever so slightly faded because of the direct sunlight that streams in all day long through the window. My bedroom has One build in wardrobe that has clothes towering out of it, a nice warm and comfy bed that usually is never made, One big window with an amazing view, A drawer with clothes stuffed inside, One bookshelf with books from when I was little and a big abstract mountain photo hanging above my bed. so I was a bit confused. Im a bit compulsive, whereas is Sam is often tired or moody, so the room not only has the consistency of Two-Face in cleanliness, but will also resemble him; one half dark, messy and overall ugly, one half clean, clear and less ugly. sleeps in my room. Example 1: Secondly, the accessories. My bed is in the corner of my room and is out of the way so you don't have to walk around it. The jewelry box once belonged my wonderful Mother. Separating my sister and I is a large divider, that holds all of my adored books and other well-used items. My bed sits in the very middle of the room, while my large dresser, containing all of my clothes, is tucked in beside it. The reader doesn't know what you mean, but overall its very good. And I would try and keep it a bit more tidy! My bedroom is exactly the way I like it, there is a chair in the corner which is very comfortable. My room smells inviting, it's like strawberries mixed with flowers (which smells good). I personally like the way my bedroom feels and looks. Well, kind of - there isnt a set theme but there is a lot of stuff from the beach. The carpet is the only material on the floor in my bedroom. Its in the garage for the same reason, but on the other hand it does have a lot of space. The layout of my room is made so everything can fit. Mine is to the right of the door and facing it, whereas Sams is directly in front of the door facing towards it too. In my room there are lots of clothes and stuff on the floor my room is very messy, and it is hard to get around without stepping on something if I want to do something in it I have to clean it, also on hot days it can be very hot and sometimes it can be really cold when it is rainy and windy. I think Hannah's story had lots of descriptive words and had good punctuation and spelling. I slowly put my hand on the door handle and opened it, the sun instantly warmed me up, the colours stood out, the bed looked very cosy and the wall decoration looked very creative and bright. Hats and sports bags under the beds in the dark. I suck creamy cock. The style of my room is very rustic and original. Write something about yourself. Brown that stands out because of the shine. Sometimes I don't even have enough space to use my massive laptop because all my pens and books and rubbish are in the way.I need to give it a good clean. It is literally a big, black dust nursery because its elevated to nearly touching the roof and Im short. I have many colours in my room. You need to work on capital letters (eg. You might walk through all the different scenes of people playing and say, wow, my home has become a playground today!. I like how you have used lots of descriptive words. (The shark's teeth are sharp.) Other than for sleeping I use my bedroom to do my homework (at my desk), catch up with all the goss on social media and of course as a space to be alone for a little while. The floor in my room is medium sized. A metaphor for home explains your feelings about your home by using figurative language. Youd need to think of something your home reminds you of: a zoo, a swamp, a castle, or a zen retreat. Then, you can say your home is a zoo (or a swamp or a classroom, or whatever!) in order to create the perfect metaphor to describe your home. So try using better descriptive words. 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